Its a great story. It is nice being able to read stories where Harry really isn't all that nice; I mean after the shit he's been put through by the Dursley's, and Dumbledore not mention I hate how Mrs. Weasley tries to mother him all the time. She needs to lay of; same with Ginny and Ron's a prat.
Keep up the great writing. But remember everyone still needs to be loved, especially Harry.
Author's response
Thanks for the review mate, I agree with you, after everything that Harry went though, you wouldn't think he would be all that nice and forgiving...