(#) Jden 2010-08-31
Yes there are problems with the story but the author is trying to improve it. I, for one, have no problem with attempting to give encouragement since the author is attempting to at least give a couple of twists to the story.
Cerindipity, I can only assume you do not try to wade through the slash fest of fanfiction very often. With all it's problems this story is superior to a great many posted there which have large following of posters (damned if I know why unless their all unsane).