I really loved this chapter, it was so beautifully written.
I also like how when Gerard slid his hand under Frankies shirt he didnt mention it, i dont know why I like it so much....I guess....yeah i dont know i just liked how the convosation carried on.
I suggest paragraphing a little more so its easier to read but thats no big problem hehe.
Love this story so much, im off to read more. Just thought i would comment because daaarling, you deserve it ^^
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