Interesting and attention grabbing start, you've got. I'm looking forward to seeing the Harry, probably much nearer canon!Harry, who wants a family. What's going to be interesting is how these two widely separated individuals get together and what else happens along the way. I wonder how Lila will take to a much nicer and subdued version of her brother, and to the knowledge that he lost his parents on the long-ago Halloween? I wonder, too, how -this- Harry will take seeing what he could have grown up as, something almost as bad as canon!Draco except a bit more civilized and, most likely, Gryffindor rather than Slytherin (sounds rather like Ron Weasley if he'd been from a rick family, doesn't it?)/