There's a large bit of difference between a lesbian and a gay male. Believe me, I know as I am gay. I hate the female view-point on homo-sexual relationships. None of you ever get it right.
This is rated negatively for a reason, one I endorse whole-heartedly. This story is quite simply, boring so far and the mechanics aren't very good either.
Author's response
Fair enough. I know there's a difference between a lesbian and a gay male. I disagree with no females getting homosexual relationships right, however. I know one female writer who (as far as I know) is completely straight and a published writer of an excellent homosexual story. But, I severely doubt you'd agree with me so I won't bother continuing.
If you feel this negative rating is completely deserved, cookies to you. Again, I can't say that I care since I don't write for other people, but your opinion is appreciated.
Thanks for the review.