Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) Celexs 2010-10-13

Anther great chapter, I really enjoy this story, I like the way you are having Harry deal with the slackers, and I look forward to seeing how that will all play out. I also liked the idea of having Dobby test Harry and Harry test Dobby at the same time. It was a great way to show that even harry has room for improvement. I look forward to the next update.


Author's response

Thanks, Celxs.

I'm glad you are enjoying the ride.

The slackers: I would never consider taking an unqualified soldier into combat, and I need Ron and Seamus there, so I had to give them a little push. It'll all work out.

Dobby -v- Harry: Yeah, it was the only reasonable way. Both are nearly equally qualified, but each has advantages the other doesn't. So far, Dobby's advantage is greater than Harry's and as you said, it shows that Harry has not become a Harry-Stu.