Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) Cateagle 2010-10-20

Before I get to the commentary, a few typos, mostly dropped letters, grabbed my eye. "...she understood tat sometimes..." should be "...she understood that sometimes..."; "He interrupted hr musings." obviously should be "He interrupted her musings.";

Author's response

Heya Cat.

I counted the errors. A dozen misteaks in twelve thousand words is a pretty good ratio, meesa thinkin'.