Review for Young Again: The Rewrite

Young Again: The Rewrite

(#) Cwejr 2010-11-02

Well, it's been four years since you published the first chapter. Sort of a flash in the pan, then nothing. If I had to wait four years to read the second chapter of a book, I wouldn't even be able to find the book. Do your self a favor and pull this story. Leaving it up is doing nothing but irritating your potential readers, or at least mark it abandoned. You started off good, but where's the beef?

--a very frustrated reader.