A very Cool Chapter.
I like Fluers character and always felt she was underused in Cannon. Her character has so much potential, and I am always glad to see her well get some justice in your work.
Although the main purpose of this chapter was for Harry to shag Fluer, when I read this it seemed to have more plot and less smut than some of the rest. Probably because you put some effort into describing the characters past, especially Fluer.