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Dark Times Call for Dark Measures
Dark Times Call for Dark Measures
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Saicha6744
2010-11-08
Sweetie, use paragraphs. This chapter read difficult due to the lack of paragraphs. Use it especially when characters talk to make the dialoge easy to follow.
(p.s. Baited breath not battered breath)