Review for Blur
I think it's read-worthy (obviously, since I read it) but um, I'm kind of curious- you know that 'passed' refers to going (like "I passed by her on my way to work) and 'past' refers to the past? Like "The past few weeks blah blah blah"?
Sorry. I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi -.- It's like a curse, I swear..
But I like the idea you've got going for this. It's a big original:)
Author's response
Yep I do, but if I have wrote it wrong then I am sorry
I am slept check nerd too xD
But thanks (: