Review for Original Sin

Original Sin

(#) keegan 2010-11-29

Says the MCR writer. Constructive not destructive, what? Practice what you preach, idiot.

From what I've gathered in your fic so far, it is a bit boring in many areas, and in other others, I don't see well-bred pure-bloods acting, interacting, or committing some of the various indiscretions the way they do. Just an observation that will probably be shot down by the hypocrite up there.

Author's response

Well, the pure-bloods are still at school and are at a young age (11-18), so they shouldn't really bet committing indiscretions yet. And what parts would you consider boring?