(#) lycus 2010-12-15
I love the story, but I still think that you like to torture us by having Hermione having sex with ron and having Harry see it. I still remember the most Heartbreaking scene that you ever wrote where Harry had to not only hear but be in the same room when the woman that he loved gave herself to ron and he had to suffer through it. But as far as this story goes it is a good aftermath story, Not a lot of writers give them major pschological problems to deal with and having Luna and Lavender show up with their own problems really gave Harry the insight that he needed to realise that he needs help also. Over all this is a great story and I look foward to more of your work.