Do you know how I decide if a story is good or not? Sure, there's grammar, plot and character development and all that jazz--but the biggest is if you can feel what the author wants you to feel. Can you actually, tangibly feel Abbey's confusion, pain and happiness? Well, I can honestly say yes. You did a magnificent job with this story. I enjoyed this story immensely. :3
Author's response
Thank you so much! That is honestly one of the nicest things anyone has ever said about my writing. I'm so incredibly flattered and happy to hear that. Comments like this help me gain confidence in my writing. Thank you so much again!
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