Review for Halloween

Halloween

(#) Givin_Em_Hell_x 2010-12-22

Hahaha! "'fuck me' mode." I love the way this story is written. It has some grammatical errors here and there, but I love the narration and the detail you put into it. Good job, not many Frerards can hold my attention nowadays... and I can tell the sex is going to be hot. Onwards! :)

Author's response

Yeaah, I always put my work through a spell check but I have started lapsing on the whole proof reading thing which is bad of me xD So there will be stupid mistakes I should clear up... I've noticed I tend to put 'slightly' when I mean to put 'slight'. It's a bad habit xD
But I'm glad that doesn't stop you from enjoying it :D And well, I like my frerards to be a little more spicy than most peoples, so hopefully you'll agree ;D
xo