Wow. /God/... Just... Wow. Honey, I know you must've worked really hard on this, but... Elipses (the '...'), there's only three of them. Ever. No dramatic pauses. Use real grammar, not text talk, ever. 'Sexily' is not a proper adjective, I believe, as well.
I'm not trying to be mean (Being mean is not in my nature, but unfortunately, I am a grammar Nazi, meaning I protect the sanctity of the English language), I'm trying to help. Honestly.
Do you have an editor? If not, contact me. I'd be happy to help you.
xoxoTSNA
(ps, the generally accepted eye colors of the world are: brown, blue, blue gray, gray, or some variation of hazel. Hazel is about the closest you can get to 'yellow' eyes, which, unless you are wearing colored contacts, is generally accepted as physically impossible. Just a heads up.)