Forget it. I went back, reread it, and decided that this is hopeless. It sucks.
Oh guess what? I lied. I'm NOT. A naturally nice person, but I try.
But this, THIS isn't even fucking worth it.
I would say I'm sorry, but no, I'm not.
Thank you for wasting three minutes of my life that I can NEVER get back. Have a fucking PEACHY day, why don't you?
TSNA
Author's response
Thank you for commenting on the steaming pile of shit that is 'Whispers of Remorse'. The story is just an experiment to determine whether it's possible to get a bad review on this site as most of the drivel that is posted here have good reviews. Thank you for proving us correct, and sorry for wasting your time.