I actually really like this stoy :D I'ts really good, has quite a fair bit of humor and it doesnt seem like its trying too hard, the main character reminds me of Naruto in a way, constantly getting in trouble and causing mischief, I like that kind of character :p
The story is structured well and I like how it's set out, its nice and easy on the eyes ^_^
Well done Alex :3
Author's response
awesome thanks so much i will be sure to let you know when the next chapter is out XD