(#) Vanir 2011-01-26
What Circaea said.
It's been a while so i reread it and treated it as a new aquaintance. I stand by my previous (and rather bland) reviews.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. This magical world seems a bit more modern than most, and the eloquence is wonderful. While I'm of course curious about the storyline, i also look forward to the next installment just for the language.
I really enjoyed the unstated dinner. There's no need for a blow-by-blow, and this way, this dinner is a resource for the plotholes that keep opening in the best of stories. They talked about it at dinner. So There!
Flames suck. I've had a few, and it doesn't really help to tell yourself that they don't matter 'cause they do. And not. They are a part of why my Muse took off with a strange bloke in a blue box. One day i will follow your example and finish my story.
I'll be here for the rest.
Vanir