Oh God, I can't believe this is only your first published work! Say it ain't so, or you'll totally put my writing to shame. It's much more original than any of the, ahem, "cliche" stories that tend to be published under this category; kudos! Really looking forward to some more of you're more original character!
You get a rate and a hug! :)
Author's response
Thank you so much! That is such a high compliment. The first thing I saw when I read this review was cliche and I panicked but then it ended up being very kind :). I'll attempt to get more out, I'm a slow writer