Very...raw. And visceral. It left me feeling so strange, sparked something in me. That's what good writing should do-make you feel something, even if you aren't sure what is or how you feel about it, lol. Very very powerful stuff you've written, especially about skin picking. One suggestion to keep in mind: more showing, less telling. Your most powerful points in the story are the beginning and when you show us Frank picking his skin. You don't just say that he's a skin picker or that he might be gay- you showed us through his actions. Scenes stick with readers. Lots of commentary on those scenes bogs down the flow.
But like I said, this is very powerful. It's added to my favorites and I'll be waiting for an update!!