I quite like your story, it is more, I joined just to comment, Jamie has its own personality, and I like how the story unfolds, you make it interesting, I draw, whether I feel identified with the whole situation of coffee, please Continuous, I speak Spanish and I was pretty hard to read it all, but I can safely say that the understanding without using a translator, I can not wait to read the next chapter, not to give suggestions, I can only support you, I know how will continue throughout, and I'm pretty excited, so please continuous continuous continuous!
Author's response
Oh wow! I know how much effort it must take to read a story in a completely different language, so thank you for making an effort!
I will definitely keep writing, so glad you like it!