Review for South Park in The Carribean

South Park in The Carribean

(#) lolkitteh 2011-02-21

uhm, sorry but poorly written. You need to have WHO is talking. I honestly could not tell very well who was talking when, you should go and fix that. In short: poor grammar, poor spelling, boring, but the plot is good and unusual. so, um,... good job on the general idea, bad job on the physical writing of it!