Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) ROBERT_1958 2011-02-22

Hermione should have a say in her owbn wedding.

I like the Dobby and other Elves in ths story a lot they act lie real beings not some fake fluff.

Here are a few ideas and comments and questions:

Harry nees to tell the Hogwarts house elfs not to answer to Snape's calls, becouse it to close to Dumbledore.

If Sirius Black is dead, Harry should become Lord Black. If Harry becomes Lord Black, Harry needs to nulify both Narcissa Malfoy's, & Bellatrix LeStrange's marages, as well as disowned them from the Black family, as well as the getting the dowries returned to the Black family, and any prophet from any Black family money they received, as well as bringing Tonks and her parents back into The Black Family, if they can be trusted. By nulifing both Narcissa Malfoy's, & Bellatrix LeStrange's marages, Harry cuts a lots of funds from coming to Tom Riddle.

Since Harry is Lord Griffindor, Harry should also be Lord Slytherin by conquest, as Harry defeated Tom Marvolo Riddle Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort", by destoring Tom Marvolo Riddle's, Jr. a/k/a "Lord Voldemort's" physical being as a child and again his (First, Second) year(s) at Hogwarts. Harry needs to cast "Tom Marvolo Riddle, Jr." out of the Slytherin family foever.

As Harry is heir of at least two of the Hogwarts Founders (or should be), Harry owns Hogwarts, he needs to fire Dumbledore and not alow him or any of his allies to enter Hogwarts ever again, as well as NOT allow anyone who has the Dark Mark to ever enter Hogwarts or any one who created the Dark Mark, or anyone that means harm to the students at Hogwarts, to ever enter Hogwarts.

Harry should use Godric Griffindor's sword in the war agenst Voldemort & DumbleDORK.

Author's response

Hello, Robert.

Hermione will have some say in her wedding (Judith will have more), but traditionally, the engagement dinner is planned without the bride's knowledge.

Dobby and co are some of my favorite characters, and far too often, they are overlooked by FF writers. Here, they're part of the family, in all senses.

Ideas, comments and questions:
Snape: Damn! I missed that! I'll add that order, either next chapter or the one following. Good catch, man.

Lords, etc: Harry is Lord Black. (Lord Gryffindor, Potter, Black) He has already brought Andromeda and family back into the fold. Bella is currently rotting under the ground, sans head, and Narcissa is a Death Eater. Harry has filed writ of conquest against all the Deez he and his crew kill off, so disowning them is not really a pressing concern.

Funding. He doesn't need to. At his instigation, Graswold has sequestered Dumbledore's fortune...and that of thirteen other families.

Guess which ones.

Until the audits are done, those families are penniless.

(Feel free to insert an evil chuckle here.)

Lord Slytherin. I had some ideas there, but following the most frequently used line of thought, if he became Lord of Slytherin house because he vanquished Voldy, doesn't that mean Voldemort became Lord Potter first...Not to mention lord of Houses Bones, McKinnen, Longbottom, Prewett, Meadows, and whoever he killed?

Too any headaches lay along that road.

As for casting Riddle out...he won't need to.

Firing Dumbledore: If Harry fires Dumbledore, that would give Albie time to plot. Since August, he's been having McGonagall quietly take over the running of the school. In canon, the board of governors were responsible for the placement and removal of the headmaster, and so, I'm sticking with that. Don't worry. It's happening next chapter or the one after that.

When Mr. Twinkles is gone, Minerva will be headmistress. ('The Ladies' are all on the board or influence it, and they will ensure that.)
She will most definitely not allow any marked student to return.

Assuming things don't go as planned.

Gryffindor's sword: He's got a lightsaber!

And Dumbledore is already done...he just don't know it yet.

Until next time...