I liked it, the calm but suttle expressions the soft silence of words it is a truely remarkable peice unless you ripped it off from some Author your story brings good things to mind while taking in the true story that hopefully is you own.
i cannot say anything bad about this peice and the onyx wolf is a nice touch ^.^
Author\'s Response: hello, and thanks so much. let me reassure you, though, that the story is mine (except for the obvious fact that it is fan fiction and thus the characters are some other people's property and all). everything in it--misspellings, inconsistencies and worst of all, the miserable lack of updates--is mine. it's not the first time someone asked me if i ripped the story off from somewhere, though. funny, that. but thanks for the comments. you made my day. ^__^