Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) Gauntman 2011-02-24

september 1 1997? a point of continuity would not harry be 17 years old at that point? I mean Harry was born july 31 1980 in cannon simple math kills the the suspension of disbelief in this case not trying to be snarky or mean spirited just pointing out the glaring error which killed the first chapter for me at least

Author's response

Heya Guantman.

When you're right, you're right! the story begins on Sept 1, 1996 and ends on June 22, 1997.

Please overlook that error (and the umpteen thousand others I've probably made) and read on.

Alorkin