Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) mirabilos 2011-02-25

Some fanfictions got ideas, but you really
try to make the British magical world, and,
on a meta level, fanfiction better. You not
just get ideas but apply them consistently,
bashing JKR and other fanfiction in the
process. This is, I think, unique, and you
deserve to be lauded for this.

Author's response

Hey again mirabilos.

I do try. Having read so many potentially great fanfics, that fell part when when the author forgot the consistency, I decided with mine to ensure the plotline was fluid, yet stable. Everything is done according to a certain flow. Everything has a past, present and future with subplots entering, interacting and leaving when their time is right, in order to make it read better. (Did that make sense?)

JKR: I try not to bash her too hard, as she did give us this wonderful sandbox to play in. it just seems to me that she fell asleep when the last two books were...written.

Your laurels are gratefully accepted.

Alorkin