A fascinating story. I've never seen anything similar before, and that I think is one of the highest compliments I can pay to an author. Very subtle, ethereal, with a lovely tone. It's unfortunate that it appears to have been abandoned before its time.
Author's response
Hi there,
Thanks for dropping by and r&r-ing my small story. I haven't been along that much lately, but the story is not abandoned yet. I will upload new chapters as my free time allows.
I'm really flattered by your praising words. Really, this review of yours made my day. humbly bows