Review for The Life Of a Teenage Monster: Grim Reaper's Daughter

The Life Of a Teenage Monster: Grim Reaper's Daughter

(#) StopThePress 2011-03-19

This story is in desperate need of the "Enter" or "Return" key. You HAVE to separate quotes by line breaks. It makes t one million percent easier to read. Also, you really need to start ending your sentences in periods. It gets really irritating when you've lost your place because the story is just one long sentence.