There are a lot of Fics out there that just seem to blather on, they seem run on-y, and not very real.
But your was so realistic.
I could picture, it almost felt like I wa there watching from a distance, I guess. Ya know?
Gerard seemed so ominous through. It was epic.
Before I continue to make myself sound stupid.
I just wanted to say I LOVED IT! Your writing was spectactular, astonishing, /prefect/.
You should indeed continue.