Ahh you updated! You know I was just about to bother you about that again XD, but I decided to wait and see. I thought, ' She's gonna update anytime soon now .' I was right. ^_~
This chapter was great, and I could just feel what Bob was feeling. I felt bad for his mom though; thinking of how sad she would have been if Bob had been dead and bloodied when she came into his room.
I loved the interaction between Gerard, Frank, and Frank Sr. I was quite amused by his reaction to Gerard's implication of "I'm loaded." XD
This is such a great story so far, because you actually think about the plot. (And you do an awesome job of writing it too!) For that, I think it's okay to take a little time for these chapters, because it really is worth it. (Well, I don't mind if you're a little fast at it lol.) You don't have to rush though. But just know that I will come to bother you if it has been a while!!! XD hehehe...
~sheXxie
Author's response
Yeaah my updates are not the fastest XD I'm glad your enjoying it though :D
I didn't feel like much happened in this chapter so I'm pleased that you still found it amusing x) I do take forever thinking up what to throw at you guys next, I like to keep you all guessing ;D I don't think any of you will be expecting what I have planned ;)
Feel free to bug me as much as you like, sometimes I need a good ol' kick up the ass to get me motivated so thanks for providing that XD
Muchos love xoxo