awwwww that was wonderfull aww wished i had read it ages ago could of rated then, but i was so busy anyway this was just great ebyond it actually AMAZING AWESOME INCREDIBLE yeah there the words i was looking for haha
this is great, but in a way i liked it as a one shot or maybe you should make it into a two shot :) that would be good
it is really awesome and i think you write so beautfully
very good job bravoo bravoo lol
cheers
and dang i'm jeloues you now have 21 reviews :o haha but cant say you dont deserve them you are really quite the writer :D
man i go on XD
but yeah one more chapter would finish it nicely or as many as you want, it's uo to you really :)
xx coz
Author's response
oh my god, thank you :D smiles like smiling lunatic so glad you liked it- i love your reviews!! xD yeah, i agree with you about it being a oneshot or a twoshot- i think it's more powerful that way :) i'll see...i'll try and write another one to finish it off, but i'm not sure yet.
i know, i can't believe i have 21 reviews! i'm really chuffed :) i wasn't even sure people would like this haha!
thank you so much- that has to be one of the nicest reviews i've had! thanks for reading, and glad you like it :D
CosmicZombie xo