Review for Mentor and Protégé

Mentor and Protégé

(#) jsharbro 2011-03-30

I think its a novel concept certainly. I think the style is a bit tiring though. Hopefully the sequel flows better. Particularly with the typos, it is difficult to read. The imagination is certainly there, but the writing can definitely improve. Good luck, and I look forward to watching you face the challenge!