FicWad

I very nearly facepalmed when you brought up the Veela Bond and the mermaid war. Nearly. However, you basically took the same approach to it as Jeconais did in his story "Hope," which is a good thing. All three Grangers were portrayed well, ESPECIALLY since you didn't fall into the "Dan and Emma" fanon trap. The best line of the chapter was Harry in bed with a Veela pretending she was Hermione.