#1. I really like reading from Frank's POV, he has so much sarcasm that I love it. I mean, princess fro fro, fungus feet hilarious! Also the title of the chapter sounds like him.
#2. You do a really good job showing the difference between Frank. I hate reading the same story with the same exact emotions just changing the names.
#3. You also did a good job with Ray, you made him into a total dick. I want to punch him right in the nose.
#4. I have no idea where this story is going. I mean that in a way like in some stories, it's "Oh hi my name is Gerard" he said "Hi my name is Frankie" he said "Well Frankie I only known you for 2 minutes but I love you" "Oh Gerard I want to have your babies!!!" and then some AWEFUL lemons and then it's the end. With your story I am really curious on how it's going to end.
I think I ramble to much but yea I like your story and I can't wait until you update again.
Author's response
#2. I know right?! I mean, there are two PRETTY different sides to every story. I think people should make a point of having different point of views actually be different.
#4. I KNOW. I hate that. I noticed most Frerards are
Frankie or Gee moves to the others school.
Frankie and Gee have alot of classes together.
They realize that they are madly in love with each other by Wednesday.
Then, someone gets beat up, and then someone cries, and then it's all happily ever after.
I love it when people ramble, because I feel obligated to ramble back. XD