I didn't think that the chapter was bad, nor any other stories of yours! They're really good, But it's up to you(: can't wait for this story to be up agian:D
I would love to be in your story(:
Name: Romy Patten
Appearance: really tall, slim, long dyed black hair down to midback straightened(originally a blonde), greeny-brown eyes, pale skin, small tattoo on hip that says courage.
Personality: Very protective, friendly, honset, good sense of humor, calm, easy going but can snap and lose temper, cannot hold up well under stress and pressure, a shoulder to cry on, reliable, not always sensible, sometimes quiet, sometimes loud and hyper
Likes: Music, friends, love, fixing things ie cars, writing, drawing, horror movies, autumn.
Dislikes: Meat, homophobes, swimming in places like the ocean and lakes etc, spiders(got a really bad phobia of them), technology ie computers (can't work them!! :P), crappy music, putting up with people's shit
Style: lacey things, skinny jeans, band ts, converse, doc martens, eyeliner, black nail polish, heart necklace, mini shorts/skirts.
Thanks so much, i hope I can help.
I can't wait for the story, i hope that you're ungrounded soon! :D
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