I really liked it! It was well written and an interesting twist I never would have seen! It kind of reminded me of the Xmen...... Charles and Magneto, you know? But I think it was very interesting and sad! -_- Poor Orochimaru... I felt bad for em!
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I'm very glad you liked it. ^^
And lol, you're totally right about it reminding Charles and Eric. (Though I kinda suck for not seeing it before you told me.)