Love this whole story.
I thought I was going to die when I read your comment at the bottom about your mum finding one of the sex scenes because I choked on my drink. I would have died if my mum had seen that and I am 14! Anyway, great job on the story :)
Author's response
yeah, it was pretty funny actually. She was just like. 'If your gay, that's fine but if you fuck on my bed you die'. Then my Dad walked in and me and my Mom were both howling and he asked what about and Mom goes 'the sex scenes she writes' and dad goes 'yeah, i read them all the time, better than babe station' and i was crying with laughter cos he was just acting like thats a normal thing to say to your 12 year old daughter. I was laughing so much i cried!!
Thanks for the review anyway.
Jackie
xxx