Okay, one suggestion of constructive criticism... The dialouge needs to be labeled or something. Like who said it. There were a few spots in there that I had to figure out who it was, and one spot where I was just totally confusing. Not being a Simon Cowell or anything, just saying.
Aside from that, yay! The date went well! And Em would eat meat if it wasn't for Frank? :P She needs to eat meat again, it helps. The first time did sound very simple, so I see why they didn't exactly talk about it all that much... And yes, Gerard, catholic freaks. I could never be catholic, too much standing and sitting... One church service was enough for me.
Update soon!
Author's response
hahaha i go to a catholic skool so yea i know what you mean. and i totally agree with the dialogue i wrote it and in some parts i got really confused.
but thank you thank you thank you so much for the reviews i'll try to update as much as possible.