I really enjoyed this fic! (Just came back for a second read and thought it needed reviewing). I really felt like Riley! I thought it was a great, interesting storyline and it was awesome to see how it developed and how it might have been had Riley actually existed or even to be Axl's girlfriend in the true love(ish) kinda way that Riley is. The way you took it right from the beginning and showed the contrast between Axl and Riley was also great. Your characterisation was really good!
To sum up, an epic fic. I never really thought I'd go for a fic that involved an OC or a band member and a girl but you've proved just how good such a fic can be! I'm running out of superlatives. Keep it up! ^^
Author's response
Wow, thanks! That's got to be the best review I've gotten yet. I was really wondering if people were connecting to Riley like I hoped they were, and apparently they are. This has made my day! :D