Wow. Just.. wow.
seriously. Usually I'm such a nazi about stuff like this, but in your story there's just nothing I can point a finger at. I love your style, your sentences are well structured and not too long, the idea's original (as far as I'm concerned) and really intriguing, and all those cliffhangers are leaving me nail-less D:
some stuff in the first chapters was a bit cheesy/not realistic, imo, but I see no trace of that anymore.
So don't make us suffer would you? update asap? (puppy dog eyes)