The smut was good, perfect for a rater-r scene. Any more, NC-17. Any less, that's just a fucking makeout session. You did just fine.
But it was all a dream? Man, I feel sorry for Gerard... It's gotta suck for him that it was all a 'dream'... Was it a dream? Or his imagination? Or a unicorn eating Skittles sitting on him? Or real? Yeah, I feel sorry for him. But do I hear a geegasm on stage coming on? Poor Em...
Update soon!