the smut was a little confusing for me. it was a little vague after reading it i think thats wut confused me, but for your first time it was great! i thinkif you want to do better at your smut then get some romance novels with those big guys and little girls on the front half naked. those have lots of action. lol my mom reads those. and i get some at the library and my mom to find some new ways to write and pick up on some new ideas and stuff for my writing. it really helps. More Pleeaz!