So Frank and Gerard are star crossed lovers who can't be together, huh? This is starting to get exciting. This chapter was also good, your descriptions are coming on really well. The way you described the tension between Frank and Gerard was great and how Gerard gasped when they touched. Very nice. Just read over it again and edit the few things I spotted, if you look hard you'll find them. It's only spelling mistakes and things.
By the way, I know I'm irritating commenting on each chapter with my criticism. But this story really does have a LOT of potential and I'm actually really enjoying it. So you just try and shake me! XD