great chapter. your take on 'animagus transformation rituals' is one of the more believable ones out there. and you should have let harry boink somebody, not necessarily knock up but atleast a quick wham bam, thank you maam.
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Author's response
Well Harry is running into a problem where he is learning that casual sex without any attachments is seldom as casual and without attachments as one would like to think. He is on his way to becoming the person we glimpsed in chapter 1. ~Jim