Awwwwwww! Cliffhanger! I love this story. The only thing I can suggest is longer chapters if you can. But instill really like this story.
Author's response
I try and make the chapters longer but it takes me forever to write them and I think they are quite long when I am writing it but it turns out they arn't that long. I will try and make the chapters longer but it is quite hard :P Thank you for reviewing :)