It is things like these that I love about you! The way you are able to portray intense emotions so realistically is just nothing short of amazing! The real world is terrifying and harsh and sometimes everything just collapses in on us. It is good that you actually show that, because otherwise it would feel too happy and too perfect, like how a celebrity's life is supposed to feel. Please, don't delete it. I'm sorry if you don't like it, but your readers definitely do...
-Maria
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