This story makes me "'Naaaw" and giggle in a very sad, teenage girl who doesn't get out much sort of way.
Good going.
One thing. You don't want to make this story go too fast but you don't want it too slow either. You're doing good at the moment but if I were you I'd maybe pick up the pace a little bit.
Author's response
Don't worry, I know exactly what you mean by that and I've decided to make my chapters longer and more eventful now.
Thanks Vicious.