Review for JEDI POTTER

JEDI POTTER

(#) Wolfric 2011-04-26

Fine chapter. I can easily see Ron as a loose cannon even with all his training. Unfortunately training doesn't automatically confer maturity. Thanks for writing. W.

Author's response

Heya Wolfric,

I find myself in complete agreement. While this Ron isn't as bad as in canon, he's still too easily influenced.

Alorkin