Review for JEDI POTTER


(#) mwinter 2011-04-26

Okay I'm stumped. You have for the last two chapters made it seem like ron was going to go and die in the battle. Yet now you have Luna probably going and also pregnant at the same time. the only way that I see her being sad is that Ron still goes and high jacks his way either threw a scared elf or one of the goblin portkeys and then dies. Cause for Luna to die along with her unborn child is just wrong. Great chapter.

Author's response

Hello, mwinter.

You guessed most of it.

"Shhhh! Be vewwy, vewwy quiet! We're hunting pwot bunnies!"

Luna is safe.